What do you think about this poem? It's a long one, I know.?

Wow that is a long one!! But Very very good. I was intrigued. At first I thought it was coming off trashy but I am older. ha! But I think you are a really great writer!! I write poetry as well. A different kind I must say I think you should check out poetry.com and also some other poetry areas on the internet. you may get some good results. Keep it up!! I enjoyed it.